I did this well because i worked well with my group to create a effective and well organised pitch.
When we did a run through our pitch to the class we got some feed back from Mr Hind which i took into account for when i am going to be presenting in the afternoon.
These were things like to talk more and explain more, say the same things which are on our power point.
I could improve on my talking and stuttering and refine our power point to make it more interesting.
I then got back with my group and we refined our work and really just did some finishing touches. I did this well because i worked with the feed back i had got to improve, i could improve on communicating with my group as this week i was more frustrated and under pressure.
When we did our pitch to Clare i spoke much better and took my time, i did this well because i had practised with my partner before and was ready and confident. How ever improving on my speech better because i was at times butting. Perhaps more co-ordination.
I was happy with the feedback i got from Clare because i worked hard and the end result was good.
Last week of CRAM with Mr Hind, going to miss it.
